Wow! This is beautiful! And the story you wrote explaining your "discovery" is really cute.

I love how John is still the warrior and that detail around his eyes. I guess with John's darker hair, there would be fewer comments about his hazel eyes. And look at his geta! How sweet!

Love Rodney's hair. And a lovely pattern on his kimono.

The only thing that strikes me a little odd is that Rodney's mouth seems to be slanted on the wrong side (see Rodney at the top of your LJ). He does have his head tilted, so maybe that's just me.